Talk:Mists of time

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This is my first ever article. What do you think? Krazyhades 04:22, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

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This is my first full article on Uncyclopedia, though I've added a bit to a couple others before (often without being signed in). I wanted to know what people think of it, and what I can do do improve my style and the inherent humor of the page.

--Krazyhades 20:16, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

For some reason the linky in the title isn't working. Perhaps it has something to do with the casing of the second char (the i in the title. The artice can be found by following [this link]. -- di Mario 13:14, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

I fixed the link. The t was supposed to be lower cased --THE 13:00, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 8 Congrats! Douglas Adams would be proud. However, in order to score a 10, you need to add a bit more.
Concept: 9 Good concept.
Prose and formatting: 10 Extremely sophisticated. Vocabulary is great (made up words seem real) and there are no grammatical errors as far as I can see.
Images: 0 Lets the side down a bit. I understand that it's hard to get images for something like this, but maybe try and put in images of what it's not. (You mentioned it was not Donald Trump.)
Miscellaneous: 10 Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy 2.
Final Score: 37 Only two things stand between this and glory - its shortness and its lack of images.
Reviewer: {Ikabu}BUZZ...FLICK...GURGLE... 06:33, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
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