Talk:Manfred von Richthofen

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this one gave me agonizing writer's block for the longest time, but i finished it. what say ye?--SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:19, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

pee review 1

this article was a blast to write, but i've read it so many times i can't evaluate it's value anymore. is there, as was intended, funny in it? as always, free prize for helpful review. --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:26, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 9.9999 It was, umm, great! Don't change a thing.
Concept: 10 A solid concept worthy of the highest praise for the way it was used.
Prose and formatting: 9.5 Great prose. Minor typos and formatting issues. Very minor.
Images: 9 The images are good. I especially like the Snoopy Image.
Miscellaneous: 10 You win major points for the Snoopy V. Red Baron epic story. It is truly funny.
Final Score: 48.4999 Great article. If you wish, tweak it (or not), and put it in Uncyclopedia:VFH. It deserves it.
Reviewer: --BlueflatcapsigMajor'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 06:07, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

pee review 2

going with the theory of 'i can have two pee reviews active as long as i give out many more reviews myself'. looking for a second opinion, first opinion found here. as always, free prize for all reviewers! --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 09:36, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

I say you VFH it. Solid great article--Æ 20:59, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 10 Wow! I'm impressed, Gerry. Very well done! Peanuts humor is good, and the other jokes are well done.
Concept: 8 Great concept. The idea of basing it on Peanuts is good, and the jokes can be understood easily because of that.
Prose and formatting: 9 Good-looking, and a good article to read.
Images: 7 Most of the images looked good, but that one with a kid on a red plane looked like an obvious and weak photoshop. The kid was really blurry compared to the plane. Also, you could make that picture look a bit older, to fit with the other picture of the Red Baron. Other than that, well done.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 Average of all other scores.
Final Score: 42.5 Amazing article! AE, do you count this as good enough?
Reviewer: User:Uncyclopedian/sig
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