Talk:Manfred von Richthofen

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this one gave me agonizing writer's block for the longest time, but i finished it. what say ye?--{{User:Gerrycheevers/sig}} 22:19, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 
this one gave me agonizing writer's block for the longest time, but i finished it. what say ye?--{{User:Gerrycheevers/sig}} 22:19, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 
==pee review 1==
 
this article was a blast to write, but i've read it so many times i can't evaluate it's value anymore. is there, as was intended, funny in it? as always, free prize for helpful review. --{{User:Gerrycheevers/sig}} 22:26, 7 December 2007 (UTC)
 
{{Pee Review Table
 
|Hscore=9.9999
 
|Hcomment=It was, umm, great! Don't change a thing.
 
|Cscore=10
 
|Ccomment=A solid concept worthy of the highest praise for the way it was used.
 
|Pscore=9.5
 
|Pcomment=Great prose. Minor typos and formatting issues. Very minor.
 
|Iscore=9
 
|Icomment=The images are good. I especially like the Snoopy Image.
 
|Mscore=10
 
|Mcomment=You win major points for the Snoopy V. Red Baron epic story. It is truly funny.
 
|Fcomment=Great article. If you wish, tweak it (or not), and put it in [[Uncyclopedia:VFH]]. It deserves it.
 
|Signature=--{{User:Ggarfield/sig}} 06:07, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
 
}}
 
 
==pee review 2==
 
going with the theory of 'i can have two pee reviews active as long as i give out many more reviews myself'. looking for a second opinion, first opinion found [[Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Red Baron|here]]. as always, free prize for all reviewers! --{{User:Gerrycheevers/sig}} 09:36, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
 
 
:I say you VFH it. Solid great article--{{User:AE/sig}} 20:59, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
 
 
 
{{Pee Review Table
 
|Hscore=10
 
|Hcomment=Wow! I'm impressed, Gerry. Very well done! Peanuts humor is good, and the other jokes are well done.
 
|Cscore=8
 
|Ccomment=Great concept. The idea of basing it on Peanuts is good, and the jokes can be understood easily because of that.
 
|Pscore=9
 
|Pcomment=Good-looking, and a good article to read.
 
|Iscore=7
 
|Icomment=Most of the images looked good, but that one with a kid on a red plane looked like an obvious and weak photoshop. The kid was really blurry compared to the plane. Also, you could make that picture look a bit older, to fit with the other picture of the Red Baron. Other than that, well done.
 
|Mscore=8.5
 
|Mcomment=Average of all other scores.
 
|Fcomment=Amazing article! AE, do you count this as good enough?
 
|Signature={{User:Uncyclopedian/sig}}
 
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Latest revision as of 21:14, September 5, 2008

this one gave me agonizing writer's block for the longest time, but i finished it. what say ye?--SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:19, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

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