Talk:Mad TV

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Humour: 7 It's quite funny if you've seen the show. But many people haven't, and I'm afraid it might leave them clueless. But I think it's humor that can be perceived by anyone regardless.
Concept: 7 I personally try to steer away from articles about real-life Tv shows, bands, movies, etc. whenever possible, because I find it's somewhat hard not to disregard parody and just write random scathing. But you did an excellent job with this article.
Prose and formatting: 8 The phrasing at some parts was a bit awkward, but overall, good job with the grammar and spelling. Maybe the punctuation (quotation marks) could use some work. Try italics or bold to emphasize words, not capital letters, as in "WHAT?" or elongation, as in "plshhhhhhhhawwwwww". Little things, but they help.
Images: 10 At the moment, it's "Does not apply." Really, try to get some images in there. (This is another reason why I don't like doing these types of television show articles; good, relevant images are somewhat hard to produce)
Miscellaneous: 8 It starts off as insulting the reader, then goes into a sardonic description of the show itself, which is good. But I'd stick with the mocking theme throughout the whole thing. Just to give it some consistency.
Final Score: 40 I'd say it's a good article overall, but it could still use improvement. And images, if you will.
Reviewer: --Señor DiZtheGreat Cuba flag large CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 18:06, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
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