Talk:Los Angeles, California

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That Jewish cowgirl near the top of the page is hottt. Oh, and the article is good, too. DAK4Blizzard 07:15, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

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Los Angeles is the warmer versino of New York City, with nicer people then New York City, but with just the same, if not worst, gangs and violence. Los Angels is so freakin big, that even people who live here don't know all of the city, and actually, try to avoid the parts where there are lots of blacks and Mexicans (meanwhile blacks and Mexicans try to avoid the parts where there are lots of white people and cops).

Los Angeles is the sporst capitol of America with passioante Laker, Dodger, UCLA, USC, Galaxy, and Kings fangs. A place where earthquakes, smog, and really realy really bad traffic exist. Its a place where some parts are super rich and clean, and other parts are really ghetto, dirty, and tagged up with graffiti.


The problem with adding this to the article is that it isn't funny, with the possible exception of the sentence "Los Angeles is so freakin big, that even people who live here don't know all of the city, and actually, try to avoid the parts where there are lots of blacks and Mexicans (meanwhile blacks and Mexicans try to avoid the parts where there are lots of white people and cops)." The only problem with that sentence is that it tends to be a run-on sentence. This could be worked into the article somewhere, but that Los Angeles is a major league sports town is already well-known, and not humorous in itself. Comparing Los Angeles to New York has the potential to be funny, but I don't see the funny in the way it was done above. -- Simsilikesims(♀UN) Talk here. 06:39, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

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