Talk:Long walks on the beach

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edit From Pee

edit Long walks on the beach

YOU GUYS HAVEN'T SEEN HIS NAKED PICTURE AT THE COMPUTER!!! Poor fool! Dream on as you reach for the cookies.

Okay, I got ICU'd again. Tell me what's wrong with it, people. --So So 03:33, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Droll. I like droll.
Concept: 8 I like this, it makes me think of Personals Ads.
Prose and formatting: 8 The use of double (quadruple?) parentheses gave me heartburn, but otherwise it's very effective.
Images: 5 Nothing sidesplitting in the image department, but really, what more can be done?
Miscellaneous: 10 N/A
Final Score: 37 This article creates happiness in my brain. I shall give Olipro a wrist-slapping for being so careless with his ICU's.
Reviewer: --The Acceptable Thinking cap small Cainad Sacred Chao (Fnord) 05:40, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Go easy on Olipro. Apparently he was just trying to encourage me to make it VFH-friendly. --So So 06:59, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

And I think I see what he meant now, so I edited it some more. --So So 08:05, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

edit Brilliant

I would nom this article right now if it hadn't already been featured. Tinymasaru.gifpillow talk 22:47, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, imagine my surprise when it got ICU'd! --S0.S0S.0S.0S0 05:14, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
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