Talk:Lesbo

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edit =This PISS was REVIEWED!!!=--75.187.220.155 16:15, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

See! Idon't have to do anything I don't want to!

Humour: 5.4 avg of all the sections
  • Intro (7)

Adequate. It looks hideous, though. Move the picture over, make the quote not so... blindingly big.

  • 1 Etymology (5)

That was random (7 -1) and short (6 -1).

  • 1.1 Famous Lesbians (5)

Like you yourself said in that section, it's pretty boring. You probably know what's wrong here: it goes on and on. I've heard of these people, but that doesn't mean it's funny.

  • 2 Geography (6)

Nearly adequate. You bamboozled me: if you're going to start with double entendre jokes, which are fun and "EXCITING", you have to STICK with them those were terrible.

  • 2.1 Climate (5)

Short, and was a buildup to one joke (that actually was kinda funny). Merge this into the geography main section. You don't need a little blurb down there.

  • 3 History (4)

What? Randomness that contradicts what you said earlier in the article! You kinda lost me.

  • 4 Tourism (6)

Okay, we get it. "Lesbos" means people from Lesbos, but it could easily be misread!

  • 4.1 The Petrified Forest and more… (5)

Why are you ending on that? I thought the ending would've been better at Tourism. Merge this with Geography.

Concept: 6 Nearly adequate idea, however I would've preferred you do a poem by Sappho. That would've been cool. Notice how this article idea inevitably leads to just a huge amount of sex jokes? That's the part about this concept that's a shame, and why it gets a "nearly adequate".
Prose and formatting: 7 Adequate formatting. The pictures kinda mess it up for your very nice writing style.
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Images: 9 Those pictures are pretty damn awesome. However, you would probably still get a 9 even if you had just a few of them.
Miscellaneous: 6.9 avg of all other scores.
Final Score: 34.3 Well, it needs to be shorter. SQUEEZE as many sex jokes as you can without being stupid, random, or annoying, into the SHORTEST amount of space possible. Sex jokes get really, really annoying after a while. I liked your style of writing alot, Zana. Keep on keepin' on.
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> 01:45, 10 November 2007 (UTC)


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