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edit From Pee Review
I seriously like self-reference style articles. And this is another attempt at doing one. Since the concept is easy but the content is hard I never really liked my ideas withing this style. This piece is the first thing that I believe stands half a chance ( with the odd help ofcource ). -- Vosnul 20:54, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
- Not bad. There's a lot of broken links, so here's a tip: before you link something, check whether or not there is an actual article. Also, run your piece through a spellcheck on Microsoft Word (or elsewhere) before you finalize it. I did it to your article, and noticed a lot of typos, so I fixed them. Great piece though. --emc! ╬ 22:50, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for you help and comments !. I dont have any MS stuff , but i'll get some better english spelling software. ( Me an uggabugga dutchy person, so english is not really native to me). -- Vosnul 22:58, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
Yeah, this is good- I reckon a little more could be made of the complicated sections (employ a plethora of inordinately esoteric wordings) but it's funny --Jamtrousers 10:05, 21 June 2006 (UTC)