Some one should make this article seem like it was talking about an actual theme park. The beginning is kind of on the right track. Also less random. --188.8.131.52 01:13, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
edit needs much work
this is just a string of insults and isn't even close to funny. --Emporer K Tut the Great 02:50, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
edit Help Needed
If you guys see what I've done with part one, I would greatly appreciate help on everything. That is- let's not make this article look like shit.
Can we try and make it so it's like how I've started it? Run through the movie, but talk to the reader as if this is how their trip is going to be?
Thanks a lot. --Undergroundbob 07:58, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
edit Not funny.
I agree, so added a short text in the beginning. But it needs more work though. --Spikeproductions 17:19, 14 October 2006 (UTC)
I think I'm going to do a re-write of this article. It's not all that funny, and I think I could do a bit better on it.
edit From Pee Review
Ah HILARIOUS synopsis.
jack s 13:49, 5 September 2006 (UTC)