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edit Frin Oee Review

Hi, please offer reviews or suggestions on the article. Thanks. --FuzzMaster 01:45, 20 January 2007 (UTC)FuzzMaster

The article has been updated substantially, and I consider the writing to be complete. I encourage re-review. Pictures hopefully pending. --FuzzMaster 19:50, 10 February 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 Very funny, especially the "Behavior" section.
Concept: 7 There's a lot of potential in jocks, as there are in any minority group, and yes, jocks are minorities.
Prose and formatting: 9 The writing was well-done, aside from a few redundancies, like "sporting clothing" or hompohonous mistakes ("way --> weigh", etc.) Very nice vocabulary; this is one of the better zoological articles I've read.
Images: 3 More images are definitely in order.
Miscellaneous: 5 It could do without the quotes, and some fixing-up in the table
Final Score: 31 Great article. Just needs a little tidying up, if anything.
Reviewer: --Señor DiZtheGreat Cuba flag large CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 21:16, 22 January 2007 (UTC)

Does anybody know about a certain Big Jock who Knew?

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