Good start and all...but Jimi Hendrix wasn't British. --

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Potential but also randomEdit

Shame the original author has disappeared for the mo. There is potential but in my view it includes some random elements that really don't mesh well enough to make a plausible alternative biography for the life and career of Jim Hendrix. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 06:41, October 19, 2012 (UTC)