Talk:Intelligent Gravitation

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edit From Pee Review

I’ve started this weird new article and weird new theory as a reductio ad absurdum parody of Intelligent Design. I don’t know if it’s any good though. Anybody want to improve it?

Thanks for the positive review. I'll add some sarcasm to really take the piss out of the reidiculous notion of "intelligent design". I'll try and use what's written on Wikipedia and bend it around to make it as funny and ridiculous as possible.
Humour: 6.5 It's not really the humor that bites here. Though it was entertaining. Try to bring in some jokes as you continue.
Concept: 10 Fuck Yeah!!! (You read conservapedia, too, didn't you?
Prose and formatting: 8 Despite being not finished, it looks very professional and well written.
Images: 7 Bring some instances of it as a social issue
Miscellaneous: 8 Not bad. Keep working on it.
Final Score: 39.5 I give it a B (would give it a A- if it was finished) already. Keep working on it and it should be nominated.
Reviewer: Happy Weasel 16:11, 19 April 2007 (UTC)
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