Talk:History of Man

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I would be pleased to have some constructive criticism of this piece. I put quite a lot of work into the links, so please do (at least) hover the cursor over some of them...Thanks in advance! --Pieface 13:39, 20 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Halfway there, if you can't think up your own, steal some
Concept: 7 This low only because its too Wikipedic, be the Uncyclopedia
Prose and formatting: 9.5 Very nice, except too many red-links, would have been 10
Images: 9.5 Again, very on topic...hint think a little more twisted.
Miscellaneous: 6 Scored by Rothchild-Horshack putrification test
Final Score: 37 Great looking, some good word play, add some one liners, fix red-links, yeah, definately, definately
Reviewer: User:Hawthorn Peebles/sig 13:59, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
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