The concept itself is very good, but the execution of the idea could be a little bigger and better.
Prose and formatting:
I caught one noticeable error, but fixed it myself. There's also one red link; just link age to old or something.
Good work from Mhaille, but the Marshall stack on the left looks as though it's floating.
The problem with this article is that there's just so much you could expand into... it leaves you wishing there was more. Which is definitely a sign that what's there is good, but it seems like there are so many jokes left unsaid that could've been mined here.
Overall good, but might not be ready for VFH. But what do I know, I haven't written in months.