The concept itself is very good, but the execution of the idea could be a little bigger and better.
Prose and formatting:
7
I caught one noticeable error, but fixed it myself. There's also one red link; just link age to old or something.
Images:
8
Good work from Mhaille, but the Marshall stack on the left looks as though it's floating.
Miscellaneous:
5
The problem with this article is that there's just so much you could expand into... it leaves you wishing there was more. Which is definitely a sign that what's there is good, but it seems like there are so many jokes left unsaid that could've been mined here.
Final Score:
35
Overall good, but might not be ready for VFH. But what do I know, I haven't written in months.
