Talk:Heavy Classical

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~ Dame Ceridwyn ~   talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 04:57, 02 August 2007

edit From Pee Review

Humour: 6 Not your best, but not bad either.
Concept: 9 The concept itself is very good, but the execution of the idea could be a little bigger and better.
Prose and formatting: 7 I caught one noticeable error, but fixed it myself. There's also one red link; just link age to old or something.
Images: 8 Good work from Mhaille, but the Marshall stack on the left looks as though it's floating.
Miscellaneous: 5 The problem with this article is that there's just so much you could expand into... it leaves you wishing there was more. Which is definitely a sign that what's there is good, but it seems like there are so many jokes left unsaid that could've been mined here.
Final Score: 35 Overall good, but might not be ready for VFH. But what do I know, I haven't written in months.
Reviewer: -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 18:17, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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