Talk:Harrison Ford I

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Oh right. So I wrote this today just because. A lot of it isn't really meant to be funny, its almost kind of a story on a ridiculous scale. --Leatherboundbooks 03:30, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 I like how you incorporated Ben's sex addiction into the article. Even if it is quite random and out of place.
Concept: 9 I think this was a great concept as a conspiracy and all. You might want to make it a bit more original though and not copy and paste from Wikipedia as much. I know that the spork tag is there and all, I'm just not a fan of them.
Prose and formatting: 10 There were a few problems in this area, but I fixed all of the ones that I noticed.
Images: 10 I really liked the use of your images because I think most articles have too many. This article has the perfect amount and utilizes in a correct way.
Miscellaneous: 7 The Early Military Career needs work I believe. I like where you are going with it and everything, but if you are going to pretend to follow George Washington's life it shouldn't say that he tried to ignite tensions between the French and Indians (well majority of the Indians) because they were on each others side in the French and Indian War. I think I know where you are going with it and all. You are correct though because the reason the war did start was when one of his Indian chief friends threw a tomahawk at a French ambassador (I believe he was an ambassador). If you need information on that, I have some detailed notes from my Honors American History class. Sorry about this long comment, heh. Great linking by the way.
Final Score: 44 Do Uncyclopedia a favor and keep writing articles. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Reviewer: JoshHJ 14:36, 27 May 2007 (UTC)
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