Talk:Gym

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My first article. Please enjoy. Feel free to belittle my sense of humour. :) --Minion 14:21, 18 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Some parts were good, but some were bad. Celebrity jokes didn't go down to well. Scratch that part. Keep the section where it talks about obese people in the membership section.
Concept: 7 A solid concept, but still could be more built upon
Prose and formatting: 8 Very good. There were only a couple minor errors
Images: 8 Very funny images. They were the best part of your article, keep them
Miscellaneous: 5 Chuck Norris jokes may seem to be getting old to some people (I am one of them) But maybe not to all. The He-Man jokes were okay, but I would like to see more thought put into them
Final Score: 33 Not great....but it is good. Spend some more time on it, then we will talk all 10s
Reviewer: Spatz
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