||Wasn't amazingly funny. I, being the retard that I am, didn't realize that Theodore Geisel was Dr. Seuss. Many other people amy not realize this. Thinking is good, but too mcuh of it makes humor most difficult. Maybe add something about the name's being synonyms.
||Great Concept...not sure what to say on that though..haha
|Prose and formatting:
||Fairly good. The section of "The Book" was confusing with the quotes directly afterwards. The sentence structure of the first sentence should be changed...slightly. I understood what you were trying to saay, but again too much thinking.
||Good image...maybe coud've been more and that first one you could actually put into your article in the first section above "The Dish" Section.
||Overall a good article, just some formatting and sentence structure.
||Good stuff man. It wasn't a laugh fest for me. But Keep working at it. I Def see some potential in this.(O and sorry about my formatting and spelling etc.)
||--220.127.116.11 05:17, 14 March 2007 (UTC)