User talk:PF4Eva/Good Burger

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edit I think it's time for a revamp

I think this article could be improved greatly. Maybe remove the 1974 version and make the 1997 version sound darker and more sophisticated. And maybe a Criterion joke could be of great use. PF4Eva, the King of Imagination talk Contributions 00:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

I am thinking about nominating Good Burger for VFH and want to know how I can improve it. I think maybe an audio that sounds like it's being read by a film historian, wouldn't hurt. I think it looks great so far. Thanks in advance. PF4Eva, the King of Imagination talk Contributions 23:45, 1 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 4 Didn't make me laugh
Concept: 5 It's not a great idea but you could do something with it.
Prose and formatting: 5 Mostly ok, but the templates are not used well and the article seems to fizzle out with those lists.
Images: 3 From the clumsily touched up images to the not very funny captions they just don't really add anything to the article
Miscellaneous: 4 -
Final Score: 21 Sorry, but this just isn't close to VFH quality
Reviewer: --Kelpan 16:11, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
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