Talk:Global Cooling

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Awesome Article lol --Uncle J 19:49, 9 March 2007 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

Humour: 7 Pretty funny, especially at the start.
Concept: 10 Great idea, used to good effect.
Prose and formatting: 5 Writing in the present/future tense is distracting. It would be better if you wrote it in past tense, as if it was an enyclopaedia article about a historical event.
Images: 7 Decent images with good captions
Miscellaneous: 7 Don't know what this is for...
Final Score: 36 Firstly, it's a very good article. If you change the tense thing then it will read better, particularly later on when it is losing the impetus of the initial joke. As always with these kind of articles there is some danger of it fizzling out after people have laughed at the idea, so some fairly ruthless editing to the bottom part of the article to keep it snappy would probably be a good thing too.
Reviewer: --Kelpan 13:16, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
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