I couldn't think of much. Tell me what you think of it so far and what you think I should add. --Sir OCdtJedraventCUNUmPVFHPLSACSWH 00:57, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
Funny in a quick, short way, like, its not like an article that I will keep laughing over for ages, but not a dud stub either. The start was quite funny, and the jokes about the french and US system was hilarious.
The concept was quite hard to grasp, it just seemed like an article which parodies a modern army in general, it didn't really stick to generals themselves. I also don't see how it was sporked from []
Prose and formatting:
The prose was good. I don't see how it can be improved, but it's not brilliant either.
Was a bid clogged up and unnoticable, like, if I was scrolling through Special:Random I wouldn't notice and read it the whole way. The dead links also did get quite annoying.
When you get right down to it, this was a very funny, tad bit listy, stubby, article. Add more images, get rid of the dead links, extend slightly, and voila! you have a feature.