Talk:Exploding whales

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Humour: 4 I laughed some, not much
Concept: 5 Pretty original. I liked the concept, but it could be executed better.
Prose and formatting: 4 Okay, first let me say high school is two words, not one. Shamoo should be capitalized. Eskimo should be capitalized. It is emo's, not emos. Well, that is just a few things I noticed that were wrong. You should check the it for those and other grammar mistakes.
Images: 2 I didn't really find the pictures all that funny, but they did go with the article. And I think it could use a couple more.
Miscellaneous: 4 You should link it to some more articles. And regarding the high school poll results, in my opinion, it would be funny if the results added up to be within just under or just over 100%, not 15% over. Also, the article was still kind of short.
Final Score: 19 Umm... I liked the article, but you should do what I said and also expand the article. So... yeah... But you did say you were going to work more on it, so...
Reviewer: --Dexter111344 05:19, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

Darnit, I wanted to do this one! Oh well, back to the creative process... -- Kip > Talk Works Puzzle Potato Dry Brush CUN Icons-flag-us 17:07, Jan. 17, 2008

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