Talk:Everybody Hates Dubya (TV series)

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Please seombody please do a pee review I don't want to get lost in the shuffle!--Dr. Fenwick 23:36, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Rooted in truth, using something outlandish to accomplish some commentary. Nice, though it could use some more belly laughs
Concept: 9 Very very nice. See above.
Prose and formatting: 6 High quality encyclopedic tone, though sometimes it floundered in its own seriousness.
Images: 8 That fat kid running thing. . .Good stuff.
Miscellaneous: 6 Still can use a lot more humor, but so much potential that I'm watching it and possibly editing it.
Final Score: 34 Suggestions: Look up some numbers for Bush's approval ratings and include them as Nielsen ratings--Theme song lyrics! Spend some time on those, and it will be hilarious, guaranteed--Make the renewal after the fourth season a shocker, "although in the face of the new game show "Flip Flop" it was less of a surprise". Hooray for John Kerry humor--Make an Al Gore joke too! In its first season, it was almost snubbed by "An Inconvenient Truce" which was a sitcom about enemies who have to live together--Bear in mind that these are all suggestions and are not at all meant to take the place of your writing. If you want to use them, great. If you think of something better, even better. Perhaps you could review one of my pees? ([[1]] or [[2]]). Cheerio!
Reviewer: Ljlego 01:23, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
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