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This article stinks!!!!!!!!!!
REPORT IT PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT IS NOT FUNNY AND IS NOT FACTUAL!!!!!!!!!!!
If you are reading this in the distant future, hello! You might not have noticed, given how much English has changed in the past (for you) hundred years, but there are probably some spelling errors in this article. This is, I emphasise, NOT my fault. Over time, things deteriorate. In May of the 2013th year of our Lord, however, it was pristine. So there, you Mars-dwelling space-bastards! Sir Reverend P. Pennyfeather (fancy a chat?) CUN VFH PLS 13:39, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
- God this artical is awful. The spelin is apaulin. It looks liek ol Englie. Lucky we don spel liek that anymor up in Yorkshire on the Moon. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Futureman (talk • contribs) 28th May 2113 (UTC)
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Ignore the comment above it was a joke.
|Humour:||6||As Reverend noticed on his talk page, your main joke is about Erwin's evilness. I do not really understand this. Did you make this joke just because he is Austrian? I think this is your main problem. There are many parts that I liked but they should be developed.
|Concept:||6||Your main problem here is what Reverend wrote and what I stated in the humor part. You lie too much. If someone types Erwin Schrödinger on Uncyclopedia, he will expect an article about his cat and Quantum Mechanics, not about Hitler and Stalin.
|Prose and formatting:||9||'Encyclopediness' is good. Grammar is correct (especially after Reverend's proofreading service) and I have added several full stops and gaps myself.|
|Images:||7.5||I am glad to see that you are very good at choosing images.
|Miscellaneous:||7.1||Your average score.|
|Final Score:||35.6||I see you are a new user here. Well done! This is a good article but needs more work! Your concept should be changed a little bit. I hope that you will become a great writer.|
|Reviewer:||Anton (talk) Uncyclopedia United 08:50, May 28, 2013 (UTC)|