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I just want to officially state that this was the first article I drafted here - even before I was officially signed onto the community.
And thanks to Sulk for reworking the intro. Gave it a whole new direction.
May it have a long and happy life - even if it
mutates, grows beyond all recognition.
BadWebDiver 10:43, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
edit From Pee Review
--126.96.36.199 21:50, 10 January 2007 (UTC)
|Humour:||6||A bit disjointed, but some good nonsensical stuff.|
|Concept:||7||Article on notable film star, conceptually sound.|
|Prose and formatting:||7||Quite competent. Why does the name switch to Elwood Wood halfway through?|
|Images:||0||It ain't got none pics. Put in an Elijah Wood headshot with the eyes warped up all big and googly.|
|Miscellaneous:||5||Kind of wandery. Needs a unifying theme.|
|Reviewer:||----OEJ 02:07, 11 January 2007 (UTC)|
Successful biographical articles often have a sense of unity, of one thing leading to another in the life or career of the character. This needs development in that direction, in my opinion. As it stands there are a lot of one-line jokes but they don't link up extremely well. Just an opinion, of course.----OEJ 02:07, 11 January 2007 (UTC)