Talk:Edward the blue engine

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This is a talk page about some engine, and you can post things on it. I am because I created the article and wanted it to have a talk page. I like talk pages! They're funny!

Er, sorry. That's just random. Help me out, guys, and post some real stuff on here! Jenkin 12:20, 21 June 2008 (UTC)

I'm not sure the "Uncyclopedia and Edward" section is helping much, maybe, I'm not sure. This really needs to be expanded. Like most of your other articles in this series really. They are all kinda a bit on the short side! I would love to help ya out, but I'm no expert in the particular chaps. Good luck with working on these though. :) MrN Icons-flag-gb HalIcon.png WhoreMrn.png Fork you! 12:50, Jun 21

Thanks! I'll have a look at it. Jenkin 10:33, 22 June 2008 (UTC)

If you want my advice, the whole thing seems a bit random and therefore doesnt seem.. right. An uncyclopedia article is funny because its like a wiki article until you read a bit of it and laugh. Things like "So there you have it. After giving Harry Potter a few magic beans in exchange for a railway" is random not funny, so next time maybe go for a topic thats more well known so you can write more, and get more factual basis to make funny =). And the section titles, it seems like you just randomly started sections on whatever you could think of rather than what someone would want to know if they really were looking up Edward. Keep it up though, thats just my opinion lol deathomato

Thank you for your opinion. I shall now wander aimlessly around my house until I have thought of a way to improve the article. JeNkIn (lol cheese) 13:53, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

I am going to rewrite this article. JeNkIn (lol cheese) 13:58, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

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