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NOTE: The following posts by jedibob are about the OLD Dreamcast article, which has been raped into oblivion.
- Holy crap. This article completely disregards HTBFANJS. Even the very first sentence after the introduction: "The truth is usually funnier than nonsense. The funniest pages are those closest to the truth." and I quote. Therefore, this gets the rewrite. HARD. JediBob Things I've said Things I've done 21:49, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
This article is so blatantly random that it causes homosexual beards from october 1, 1654 to cry beer. But it is a flat, ugly beer...
Anyway, Im making a rewrite of this article (entitled "Sega Dreamcast" in my sandbox at User:DarkBlue/Sega Dreamcast. Hope you like.
Look mommy! my article gots a good review!
(Fom pee review)
|Humour:||7||I liked some of the bits in there. You had some strange connections, but I sometimes make some bizarre/obscure ones myself, and hope the reader 'gets it'.|
|Concept:||8||I used to own a Dreamcast, long ago...and interesting mix with star-wars|
|Prose and formatting:||8||formatting: seems to be pretty much normal/regular (whatever that means). prose: I think in the 'Decline' section, where you talk about it being a piece of shit...maybe you could make that a quote from someone (find name of good exec at sega, maybe)|
|Images:||9||Fits right in with the type of article. 1 per section. All good there.|
|Miscellaneous:||10||not applicable (read: wtf?)|
|Final Score:||42||I did a couple minor edits for spelling. Think i found most. Also, usually you dont have a comma before the word 'and'..but i left those in there..I think its ready for posting. I'm still new here, so you might want a 2nd opinion (if you so desire)|
|Reviewer:||--Finnius20:16, 20 October 2007 (UTC)|
So if you want, go ahead and replace this article with mine (see link in above post)
Lolz!-DarkBlue 19:14, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
- Very good! Would give this article the breath of new life it really needs. Love the last picture, too! JediBob Things I've said Things I've done 01:13, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
- :D Yaaay! Time to steamroll the hell out of this article. Thanks for the positive feedback! DarkBlue 23:06, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
The Dreamcast Church of Latter Day Controllers would like to note that the article has been corrected for accuracy and the anti-Sega sentiment has been toned down in favour of revealing the true story of the demise of the console. Any further attempts at libel against the holy console will be dealt with by the Inquisition. In Sega we trust. ~ SotiCoto 14:00, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
- Heh, as long as it's funny! DarkBlue 17:00, 17 February 2008 (UTC)