Talk:Disney Magic

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edit From Pee Review

I haven't made many articles (only two to be specific), but myself and my friends agree that I am a pretty talented writer, so this was my first foray into making a full-length article. I would like to see how other people critique it, and if needed I will try to make it better (or make more!).TKF 23:25, 29 March 2007 (UTC)TKF 23:28, 29 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Humour is too random - needs more on topic humour. See HTBFANJS.
Concept: 5 A bit of a strange concept really.
Prose and formatting: 8 Pretty well formatted. Red links should be removed.
Images: 8 Good images.
Miscellaneous: 3 Just too weird and random for my taste.
Final Score: 29
Reviewer: Icons-flag-au Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 04:35, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
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