Talk:Deth-ray

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I want a picture of a flying blue ray disc firing blue laser beams at fleeing pirates. --Bloodrage 04:38, 22 October 2006 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

Although I am not the original author of this page, I find it hilarious and think it is a great idea that could eventually lead to VFH. Someone that is serious and has experience please give your honest opinion and suggestions for improvement in order top reach VFH Weasel Weasel 3689Sucrose b Colombia icon 03:58, 23 March 2007 (UTC) Cmon someone review it! I think it has potential to be featured Weasel Weasel 3689Sucrose b Colombia icon 03:39, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Haha, I was half expected a retarded article that was all "LOLOL!!!11eleventyone dethrayzorz!!" Instead, this is pretty funny- obviously making fun of blue ray mirite? Leatherboundbooks 23:00, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Not so funny that I laughed out loud by myself, but I found it pretty funny.
Concept: 9 As I mentioned above, it surpassed my expectations of what I was thinking would be an idiot article.
Prose and formatting: 9 Excellent prose and presentation
Images: 6 The images aren't great, but suffice. I can't imagine what to put there anyway
Miscellaneous: 9 This is a good article and it overall is worth a nine.
Final Score: 41 Nice article, meh pictures. Would be even cooler were it longer,
Reviewer: Leatherboundbooks 22:59, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
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