Talk:Dark horse

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edit Skinfan13 is pretty much out of clever headers...

Humour: 6 I get the joke, the problem is... well, will it work as a standalone article apart from this contest? I think the answer is a mixed yes. The joke also works better with your picture of a white horse. Clever on a number of levels within the context of the contest, I think this deserves a slightly above average mark in terms of humor. I mean, hey, I chuckled, right?
Concept: 7 Not bad, fairly clever, but really short. And I get that that's part of the joke as this article is not expected to win the PLS, but I think the joke would have remained intact with a few more sentences or maybe a paragraph, right?
Prose and formatting: 5 Red links. No excuse. Length, a little too short. Not much more to say on that, moving on.
Images: 7 I like the caption and the way its worded, pretty good. The image itself too is funny. Above average in presentation, above average in score.
Miscellaneous: 5 Sorry, despite being clever, I feel like I shouldn't reward a single clever joke over the hard work of others, like with the Spittoon entry. So yeah, gotta give you an average misc. score to artificially keep you down. But as The Dude from the "Big Lebowski" would say, "but that's just like, your opinion man."
Final Score: 30 Funny, probably gonna end up in my top 5 article choices, but I feel kinda dirty as I can see from the edit history you spent all of 3 minutes working on the meat of this article, but fuck it. It was funny, you deserve points for it.
Reviewer: -- Sf13 Upsilonsigmasigmacrest 0130 EST 8 FEB 2011

I can't get the joke. Please help me. -- ~ Pointy Mimorianusa (talk) • (stalk) 17:07, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

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