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Looks like you're looking for some criticism of this article? I think it looks like this could be rather good... I would say that my issue with it would be that it could do with looking a little bit more like an 'encyclopaedic' article. I'm not sure what all the double line spacing is all about in the later sections of the article, and I think it could use some more pictures. The admins here can be rather aggressive with their deletions, but I think this will be OK. Generally it does need some more work though... Enjoy. MrN 14:12, Dec 23
edit Consider it done
Well I un-messed up the formatting. Explain what you mean by "looking like an encyclopaedic article". Then I'll do that. ALCUS 15:45, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
- Well really I mean that it does not yet look like our 'better articles'. I particularly don't like the 2007 Drivers (Those worth talking about) section. Well It's not really that I don't like it, it's just that I know from experience here that people here will not like the fact that it has lots of very short sections with a tittle, and only one paragraph underneath. Generally that's not considered a good idea. Perhaps they could be merged together a little? Or maybe done as a bullet list? I personally also like to see a few more pictures. It's nice if there is a picture ever so often, and the drivers section has none for ages....
- I have added a <br clear="all"/> to the code for you. This can be used to force a heading or text to start underneath a picture. <br clear="left"/> or <br clear="right"/> also do similar.
- It's a good article though, don't get me wrong, it's rare that I do not put an ICU tag on something straight away when it's created, but this did not need it in my view. Basically it's OK, just the layout is a little sloppy. But your new, so that's to be expected. Have you read the beginners guide? There are some good links from there to how to use formatting and stuff.
- Sure thing Mr.9000.. I've always been a sarcy bastard. I can't remember where I was agressive, but hey, I'll try not to be me. :) thanks for the reviews/advice. P.O. ALCUS 16:41, 23 December 2007 (UTC)
edit Knock yourself out
Go forit: if you know anything about Champ Car/Indycar, edit this page. (I can't be bothered). ALCUS 15:41, 23 December 2007 (UTC)