Talk:Christian Logic

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I've made some more additions to this article I've started. Someone else did a little work on it too. If you read this, let me know what you think.

I've decided to make the humor a little bit more dry than some of the articles on here. The main problem with this site is that there are many great and funny articles, but so many are ruined by people adding way too many random random jokes that are just packed in to each sentence. It's overkill.

Why don't you sign up for an account so you can take credit for your work. -- Sir Mhaille Icons-flag-gb (talk to me)

I just might.

dear author, I appreciate the concept you have but it feels like your trying to make a point. As good a point as it is it's not particularly uncyclopedic to make points unless you can be funny or unless it's here, or pee review, in which case it's your business to make points as I am doing right now. read How to be Funny and not Just Stupid (not that your bing stupid per se, the opposite in fact, too serious) it's helpful. also, sadly, you could probably write your article for wikipedia and have it accepted it really is that true. although don't change your first sentence it is funny! and yeah like Mhaille suggested sign up and claim the blame credit. --Orian57 18:26, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

Okay. I see what you're saying. It does need to be trimmed. It's just that I've seen too many articles on here that were overdone. I could probably delete a section or two or add some type of graphic.

What do you think needs to be taken out? Do you have anything in mind?

sorry I took so long, had to wash the dishes before they grew a consciousness. what you've got now is pretty good though, but it could do with some expansion, maybe introduce the idea of theology? not sure how exactly it can be made funny though, I like the concept like I said I'm just not sure how to make it funny. sorry I couldn't be more help --Orian57 18:56, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

Check out the drawing I made and the caption below it. It's not much, but it's a start.

Added 'Origin' section. TheLightOfSpeed 08:20, 14 October 2008 (UTC)

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