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Hey, this is my first article (Alfonts) and I'd be really happy to get ANY feedback on it. Cheers.

Try putting in on the pee review. -- Brigadier Sir Mordillo Icons-flag-il GUN UotY WotM FP UotM AotM MI3 AnotM VFH +S 12:18, 2 November 2006 (UTC)

edit From Pee Review

OK, this is the first page I've made for this site. God, I don't even know if I've set up the pee review thing correctly! Either way, I actually made it in Microsoft Word, so for editing I nicked someone else's article and just substituted my own text/headings/pictures/etc. I actually learnt quite a lot doing it that way. Anyway, I've had some feedback on the article itself. Some people love it some hated it, I'd just like the input of a wider audience. My last concern is that it links out a fair bit, but I haven't yet put anything that links towards it. Meh! Anyway, all feedback is appreciated. Cheers. --Alfonts

Not bad. Definitely a lot better than my first page was. First off, a downer to any article is red links (links that go nowhere). Try to link to articles that actually exist. Also, categorizing your page will get it out there more. Simply find a category, and at the bottom of the page, type: "[[category:<name of the category here>]]". Also, looking at pages is a great way to learn the correct format. Nobody reads the Beginner’s Guide anyways. Overall, nice article. And on a side note, welcome to Uncyclopedia! --Hotadmin4u69 [TALK] 07:05, 4 November 2006 (UTC)
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