Talk:Celebrity Roast

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It's a pretty good article, but it could be funnier. ~ Kampfiere 01:46, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

Can you give me anything specific? I can expand, change, or trim as needed. ~ T. (talk) 19:22, 24 March 2006 (UTC)

I think that the comedy goldmine is in the idea of celebrities eating each other for kicks. That's why, for me anyway, the thing comes alive with the 'Selection' and 'Recipes and Technique' part. I reckon that if you focus on that (the dark side of vanity and hedonism), keep the fifties jive talk aspect, and tighten the whole thing up, it would be a real winner. --Hardwick Fundlebuggy 07:23, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
Oh yeah, and maybe switch the cigarette in Dean Martin's hand for a chicken bone... --Hardwick Fundlebuggy 07:26, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
I have no photoshop ability to speak of. If you've got a moment, I'd appreciate it. Otherwise, I can post a request to UN:PIC. :) ~ T. (talk) 14:22, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
Done the best I could. The 'bone' isn't really obvious, but I think that adds to it. --Sir Hardwick Fundlebuggy (Bleat) 20:04, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
Looks great to me. A nice treat for anyone that takes a minute to look at the picture.  :) Thanks! ~ T. (talk) 20:09, 10 May 2006 (UTC)

Well, I've gone over it a few more times, but am well past the point of objectivity. If anyone else can tighten/improve the idea further, go for it. I'm not especially attached to the mythical angle in the intro, though I'd like to keep the Inuit reference present, if possible. ~ T. (talk) 14:22, 10 May 2006 (UTC)

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