Talk:Canadian Tire

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I'd like a critique of this article, especially its tone. Alksubsig.gifAlksub - VFH CM WA RV {talk} 08:07, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8.5 Pretty funny :) I do like the tone, even though I've never heard of it, I get a feeling I know the place very well now!
Concept: 7 While not entirely a new idea, it is executed well.
Prose and formatting: 9 The style of writing is great, I really enjoyed it especially the phrase "customer's furtive fiddling" :) Also I think I only saw one typo/spelling thingy in the whole thing!
Images: 6 Theres only two. The quality of the logo one is a bit rough and the second one was a bit lost on me. But they aren't bad!
Miscellaneous: 8 What goes in this box anyway?
Final Score: 38.5 Overall I enjoyed this article, definately liked the tone :) Nicely done!
Reviewer: ~ Dame Ceridwyn ~ talk DUN VoNSE arc2.0 06:45, 31 May 2007
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