Talk:Caddyshack conspiracy

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My first article. need some help. Thank you. GopherKiller Questions? Comments?Icons-flag-us

Humour: 5 I found one thing funny, everything else was just a setup that never went anywhere. What I mean by that is that you seem to be setting up for a gargantuan punchline at the end of the long dry spells without any laughs, and you never get there. It's a shaggy dog story of sorts.
Concept: 5 It's strange, but has potential.
Prose and formatting: 8 Well written, though a few grammatical corrections would help.
Images: 7 Meh, relevant enough. I can't really see any way to improve them, but images aren't really my bag.
Miscellaneous: 4 If you're going to do this bizarre yet potentially hilarious topic, you're going to have to keep a few things in mind. One: try to keep the setups to your jokes at maximum three sentences. The Second Conspiracy section could use a bit of work too. Try adding some more jokes in there. The article itself is also too short. Try adding a "Well-known Conspiracy Theorists" section, and also the last refuge of those trying to make it longer, a "See Also" section.
Final Score: 29 Good luck.
Reviewer: Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 12:59, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
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