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edit Pee Review 1
|Humour:||7||Parts were funny, but some was just a bit too random.|
|Prose and formatting:||10||Formatted well.|
|Images:||8||Decent, but somehow I feel you could get a few bit better ones.|
|Miscellaneous:||10||10s make boxes go green?|
|Final Score:||42||Decent start, but could be made better. Read how to be funny and not just stupid again. With some work this could make VFH.|
|Reviewer:||--- UnIdiot | | Talk | Contribs - 00:20, 20 September 2007 (UTC)|
edit Pee Review 2
If you ahve any funny ideas for quotes I'd greatly appreciate it.--Dr. Fenwick 22:52, 24 September 2007 (UTC)
|Concept:||8.5||Excellent subject for Uncyc, not only notable but a comic as well.|
|Prose and formatting:||8||Very well done.|
|Miscellaneous:||8||I like this. A lot.|
|Reviewer:||----OEJ 12:45, 25 September 2007 (UTC)|
Endnotes: Only caveat is probably due to my status as a thickoid. What does the sentence --
- "Then perhaps the cow that tipped over the lamp that started the great Chicago Fire happened in late October or some month with 28 days."
-- mean? Somehow...I don't get it.
All the authors trying to write biographical articles should have a look at this one. It has exactly the unity of character and plot that I'm always nattering on about. Plus it has it's own voice and style.
Just a few gentle strokes at the end of the second paragraph of Box Office Rivals and it's ready for VFH. (Although I have spectacularly bad judgment about what works on VFH, apparently.)
----OEJ 12:45, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
I'm so excited my first featured article I mus sound like a major n00b--Dr. Fenwick 07:39, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
I've prtoected the page cause I don't want tpeople editing it during the two days it's displayed on the front page. It's protection banner will be removed after that, someone putting a joke about Gary Coleman was the factor in this decision.--Dr. Fenwick 18:09, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
- You can't protect an article. However, an administrator can--Sir Manforman 18:19, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
- Yesh. Just to clarify, putting on a template doesn't magically protect a page. Also, we're pretty good with vandalism. Most of us have nothing better to do than patrol recent changes anyhow. Unless we all magically get a life, you've nothing to worry about.
Oh sorry, thanks.--Dr. Fenwick 03:35, 21 October 2007 (UTC)