From Uncyclopedia, the content-free encyclopedia
edit Pee Review
|Humour:||9||*I haven't marked you down for this but be careful with your style of humour. Many people come to Uncyclopedia thinking that talking about sex and swearing out of context is hilarious. Unfortunately it is not but you have put explanation and context to your Playboy and sex references. Please be wary in the future.
|Concept:||6||*I think that your intro needs to have more to it. However do not make it specific. Put the comment about the navy in a seperate heading entitled "Military."
|Prose and formatting:||8||Good set up. Templates at the bottom and everything. Put it in more categories and make the info box larger.|
|Images:||7||I like the current pictures but more of them needed.|
|Final Score:||37.5||Very funny for a first article. I'm not sure which parts Spike was annoyed about but your revised version comes across to me as high standard work. Please write more articles.|
|Reviewer:||Sir ScottPat (talk) VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 08:39, May 27, 2013 (UTC)|