Talk:Break dancing

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I wrote the original article a while back before I registered as a user. It has been edited some so I can no longer wholly take credit, but in actuality I would like to take as little credit as possible without it being none. Please tell me how I can make this better! Thank you. --Hawx 03:47, 28 March 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Pretty funny.
Concept: 9 Also good.
Prose and formatting: 6 Red links should be removed. Looks a bit ugly. I'm not sure why, but it just does.
Images: 8 Good choice of images.
Miscellaneous: 6 A few more paragraphs would help.
Final Score: 37
Reviewer: Icons-flag-au Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 04:47, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
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