||I laughed. This is in the top 5% of Uncyclopedia Articles. Granted, the rest are about porn and Hitler.
||Long, without being too long. And it was funny through most of it, while staying consistant.
|Prose and formatting:
||Some parts got choppy and a little confusing: namley General Response, and the beginning of BM II. The rest was good
||Could use another funny one, but its really not that bad
||Could you please put some links in BMII?
||Nice. It's funny, the right length, and has decent images. I thought it was okay. If you really wanted me to tell you to add something, I would say: Please be more descriptive on the actual massacure. It seemed like you spent so much time building up why it happened that you forgot that it did. Remember, people are here to read how Justice got his skin flayed, not how Boston trades Mexicans...
||Fresh Stain Serq Fet of Pokemon (At your service)