Talk:Bella Goth

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Wow. I haven't played the Sims in an insanely long time. I remember her! --THE 13:05, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

Perhaps it should end with a cliffhanger--the inspector comes really close to some miraculous revelation, then it abruptly ends with a template saying "the article has crashed. the article will now terminate," or whatever it was that game was always saying. just a thought --THE 23:52, 24 June 2007 (UTC)

edit Information

I deleted the artice and gave it some useful information. Who ever wrote this article is not really that smart.

edit weird

This Article might actually be better than the The Actual Sims Article, which really doesn't have anything to do with the game.

I actually was thinking of saving it (The Sims) it's really just one long list.

Train Tracker 23:15, 22 June 2007 (UTC) Harass

edit Too Lazy

I'm actually to lazy to do this myself...Try Getting screenshots from the game you set up yourself.

I was thinking of completing rewriting the sims article too.

--Train Tracker 23:32, 22 June 2007 (UTC)

edit from Pee Review, why am I doing this?

Humour: 6 A couple instances are funny. For example, "aliens from the neighborhood known as Mexico" is hilarious! That was the only thing, though. Remember, Uncyclopedia is very proud of its parodyness, and we don't want any truth in these articles. There are far too many facts in this article. And remember, when making it funny, UN:HTBFANJS is your Holy Bible.
Concept: 8 Really, I cannot see why nobody has written an article on Bella Goth yet. She is a very promising character. Once you have it in tip-top form, you can sell it to all your Sims-playing pals.
Prose and formatting: 6 Eh, it gets a little sketchy. The most foolproof method of checking grammar and spelling is to copy and paste it into MS Word. Oh, and if you are going to do the slashes, make them funny. Human does not really make much sense, now, does it?
Images: 7 Naturally, you would have a picture of Bella. Come on, though, this is the Sims 2! You can make Bella do all sorts of nonsense tricks and take pictures to post. Just go to http://www.thesims2.ea.com and look on the boards for ways to make sims kiss the Social Bunny, walk like ghosts, and much more!
Miscellaneous: 6 Argh! It's too short! You could go so, so far with this article. If I were you, I would make it like a kind of murder/mystery page. Write it in the style of Casablanca, you know, like from the perspective of an investigator looking into the Mysterious Case of Bella Goth. She can be your typical victim, Cassandra can come in as a femme fatale searching tragically for her mother, and Don Lothario is the big-time mobster. Your investigator can even be Darren Dreamer, if you want to have fun.
Final Score: 33 It's a start... meaning, you have the topic. That's a huge step in the right direction. But now you need to cultivate it. May the force be with you.
Reviewer: --Vanaelin 13:38, 19 June 2007 (UTC)


edit Is the redlink necessary?

I'm talking about the "Restart Computer?" thing at the bottom. Is there a better target where we could point that link? Pentium5dot1 02:26, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

I'm going to create a sub-page some time in the future. --Lt. High Gen. Grue The Few The Proud, The Marines 02:27, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
What ideas do you have in mind for the subpage? Pentium5dot1 18:15, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
It leads somewhere now. The cliffhanger that never is solved. --Lt. High Gen. Grue The Few The Proud, The Marines 20:25, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
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