Talk:Attic

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Basically, I liked the idea of writing an article about my least favorite room, so I tried to write this. Some friends told me it was good, but I think I could have done better.

Just tell me where I can improve, and I'll gladly fix things.--Dr Wilder 22:34, 24 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 some good jokes in here. No laugh out loud moments, but there is some clever stuff in here.
Concept: 5 Doesn't have any particularly hilarious central concept. This article is more about the individual jokes.
Prose and formatting: 8 Only one complaint here: some of the links to other articles go to completely irrelevent things (such as your own userpage). This isn't a big problem though.
Images: 6 The airplane picture worked well, and had a funny caption. But get rid of the casper picture, which just wasn't funny.
Miscellaneous: 7 Some of the sections seemed a little list-ish, but that's okay because most of the items on the lists had jokes to go along with them, and most of the jokes worked. There a couple of jokes that didn't work as well for me (like the part about ghosts and the part about Xenosaga), and those parts stuck out like soar thumbs, but on the whole it's a good article.
Final Score: 33 Nice work.
Reviewer: --THE 18:55, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
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