| Humour:
| 6
| What you say is funny enough, but I believe that if you expanded on the sections, particularly the five levels of anonimity, you could have a decent-length artical with good content. The bit about Napoleon is wierd, though.
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| Concept:
| 9
| You speak the truth, indeed.
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| Prose and formatting:
| 6
| Use subgroups; it will make everything much neater, especially the short sections.
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| Images:
| 8
| Appropriate images all-around.
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| Miscellaneous:
| 8
| Teeters on random, but stays sort of sane. I like it.
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| Final Score:
| 37
| You have the beginnings of a good article here. Fix up the formatting a bit and expand on what you have; no need to use new topics entirely. Also, if you really want to keep the bit on Napoleon, try to make it fit a mite better.
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| Reviewer:
| Judgement 06:16, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
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