As author of this page, I'm allowing people to do whatever the hell they want to do with it. Just don't change it completely (unless you really want to).

But who is the author now ? It has been worked on by quite a few hands and needs a coherent edit to make it a VFh contender . --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 15:59, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

This article raped the story for me. I had finnished reading the two books so the article wouldn't spoil anything. I expected to find something along the lines of a respectable parady that rewards the reader with inside jokes that only someone who read the books would understand. Instead I find a medly of crude sex jokes that seems as if it was writen by a third grader. Someone with skillful writing skills should clean this article up. 05:15, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I do agree it needs a clean up, though the essential joke here is a reworking of the Alice in Wonderland story as re-imagined by Quentin Tarantino. Now that Tim Burton's film version is coming out soon, I will have another look at it. Feel free also to contribute though I am not sure if you meant a respectful parody rather than a respectable one which sounds more deferential to the source material. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 10:35, February 14, 2010 (UTC)