Talk:Agent Orange

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Well, i've had a stab at this to put together an article around my picture that's doing ok on VFP. I'd appreciated comment. no, yuo Tanks-12px chat 11:13, 8 January 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 It's certainly very clever, though it possibly leans too heavily on the main jokes (also, there's a chance I've been following this too closely and thus the joke is old and spoiled for me, that's a common problem with jokes that develop over a long period of time).
Concept: 7 I thought this was clever when I first heard it, and it is, but this again makes the question of the original picture more valid. It should have night goggles and a wetsuit, but I that has nothing to do with this article, really. The idea is a good one.
Prose and formatting: 7 Some paragraphs are too short, but your writing is pretty good, and there's nothing obviously wrong (like red links or something.
Images: 6 In the context of the article, the main pic makes even less sense than usual. It could use a re-imagining, but is otherwise very good.
Miscellaneous: 5 Eh, this joke has been developing for so long, I worry that the "freshness" is already gone out of it, and it may prove stale, even as a newly fleshed out version. Again, this could just be that I've been wroking with you to help improve the pic for so long.
Final Score: 31 I think this article would benefit from a re-imagined main picture, but will still suffer from the staleness of a joke that's been bouncing around Uncyclopedia for a while now. It certainly has a place on Uncyclopedia, but if you want it on VFH, you may need to inject this with some fresh jokes from different angles.
Reviewer: --<<Bradmonogram.png>> 15:57, 9 January 2007 (UTC)
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