||The humor isn't the greatest. This article is just basically an article for you to bash the club.
||The concept could be better if you weren't bashing the club. There just isn't enough fact in there to hold it together. It is just basically you saying how horrible the club is. You are also being Anti-Semantic in a few places of the article.
|Prose and formatting:
||Your prose needs some work. The last few sentences in the History paragraph need to flow better. Right now it is incoherent.
||Your use of images wasn't the greatest either. The first image isn't even their logo and the last two are images you used to bash the club.
||Try not to bash.
||-Scout JoshHJ's Page and His Talk 17:26, 28 May 2007 (UTC)