Talk:ACI Mondays

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I thought of this idea, and made it. I think it is pretty funny, but i put it here just because i always put my new articles here

I'll Try my best then...b.t.w, with "Health Inspection Score," if you just remove the EXPIRED HOT SAUCE and just leave it at 27 dead bodies, i think it would become a lot more funny.
Humour: 5 I didn't really understand the humor behind it, but some parts made me laugh.
Concept: 4 It could work, with some work.
Prose and formatting: 5 Formatting is quite good, but a greater amount of humor in regards to headings and title's could benefit the overall article
Images: 8 Good Amount and Good relevance, not very funny though
Miscellaneous: 4 could be done better, but could be done a whole lot worse
Final Score: 26 good idea, but better luck next time
Reviewer: "--JesusV2 01:54, 9 March 2007 (UTC)"
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