Talk:33 miners were buried underground

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edit Skinfan13's judgment of the article which this talk page is associated with...

Humour: 2 Oh boy... Listy list is listy... In other words, it's a list. A list with about a paragraph's worth of material under most entries, but a list nonetheless. There wasn't much here that I found to be very funny. Poking fun at something that was potentially disastrous but turned out to be one of the best news stories of the century is always an arduous task, but man... There just ain't much here. I realize you're Polish too, but I feel like the inserted joke about the death of the entire Polish government was a little out of place. I'll touch more on the overall humor in the concept section.
Concept: 3 Alright. I'm not sure what the point of this article is. It seems like its a de facto critique of world events in late 2009 and 2010, centered around the Chilean miners and the fictional response a variety of countries would take to a similar crisis. And... well, I'm not quite sure why we would need such an article. Listy in nature and a little off-beat on subject matter, it would take A LOT to make this work. Unfortunately this is just a list of half-baked ideas and jokes that runs on the long side... Sorry mate.
Prose and formatting: 3 Again. I realize English is not your native language. This score isn't so much due to your grammar and spelling, I realize that after the competition there are a number of wonderful fellow users who would love to give your article a scrubbing for you once this goes to mainspace. This score is for the list. I fucking hate lists, long lists especially. Nothing will change the fact that this is a long and laborious list.
Images: 4 Best part of the article, but I'm not sure how well what you've chosen edifies your article. They all appear to be screen-shots of news reports... The captions aren't necessarily bad, but they aren't great either. The Polish airplane crash is also a little unsettling.
Miscellaneous: 2 Long read, not that funny. I feel also that this was an idea you didn't quite finish either.
Final Score: 14 Better luck next time I think mate. Sorry about the harsh score.
Reviewer: -- Sf13 Upsilonsigmasigmacrest 0005 EST 8 FEB 2011
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