HowTo talk:Turn Your Computer On

edit From Pee Review

This is my first HowTo article. Whaddya think?--THE 18:58, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	It starts pretty nifty, but deteriorates a bit along the way. Try explaining more about why a mac is more feminine, how does one avoid unwanted pregnancy (Firewall) etc.
Concept:	8	Good concept, execution could be better.
Prose and formatting:	10	No complaints here.
Images:	0	Get some!
Miscellaneous:	7	link to more categories perhaps? Try get some geeky computer humor as well
Final Score:	32	All in all, a nice piece - but you can get it much better.
Reviewer:	~ 19:53, 25 April 2007 (UTC)