HowTo talk:Turn Your Computer On

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This is my first HowTo article. Whaddya think?--THE 18:58, 25 April 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 It starts pretty nifty, but deteriorates a bit along the way. Try explaining more about why a mac is more feminine, how does one avoid unwanted pregnancy (Firewall) etc.
Concept: 8 Good concept, execution could be better.
Prose and formatting: 10 No complaints here.
Images: 0 Get some!
Miscellaneous: 7 link to more categories perhaps? Try get some geeky computer humor as well
Final Score: 32 All in all, a nice piece - but you can get it much better.
Reviewer: ~Jewriken.GIF 19:53, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
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