||Fairly funny, definitely a satire of teenagers, so my advice is take further advantage of that.
||If you want it to be more like a teenager's POV then add curse words, and allusions that most people would understand, and sexual innuendos, and maybe make him a wigger.
|Prose and formatting:
||pretty much unnecessary here, but use more odd lazy teen spellings.
||My friend always goes straight to the images for information (he's not the sharpest tool in the shed) so add more, and keep the same approach to captioning the images, and maybe add seizure inducing images.
||It is definitely good enough to not get huffed, and good luck getting featured.
||--Idontgiveacrap 03:21, 4 August 2007 (UTC)