HowTo talk:Live in an RPG

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edit From Pee Review

FoxyBabe's last work, based on an entry at her myspace blog. It got positive reviews there, but people around there know she is Brazilian, and by so, not a native English speaker. Be kind to the lady and try to review the main concept, overlooking and, if possible, helping her with language flaws. I am a bad editor myself, everything I touch ends up as a NeedABrain's trademark text. :p -- herr doktor needsAshuttle Rocket [scream!] 22:35, 6 February 2007 (UTC)

Yup, I first wrote this at my personal blog, in my orginal language, then translated it (the best way I could, please no altavista jokes) and put on my myspace blog. People there seem to like it. Maybe it is too "nerdy"?--DAME :: FoxyBabe :: TALK 18:58, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
I thought it was hilarious myself. In fact, it kind of inspired me to do one based on fighting games. ;) --Hanyouman 17:27, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
Humour: 8 Good switching between sarcasm and absurdism, maybe too tame in some places.
Concept: 7 Obviously based on the Grand List of Console RPG Clichés(maybe a bit too obvious?), but that doesn't necessarily make it worse.
Prose and formatting: 10 Well formatted, well written. Even if English isn't your native language, it never showed.
Images: 9 Neat and nice, and quite a lot of 'em. The dancing mushroom was a bit ugly.
Miscellaneous: 9 Another minor point, maybe the article should be written a bit more in howTo-style: making the individual steps a bit more centred around single themes.
Final Score: 43 Well done, a good, coherent article with everything in place.
Reviewer: --TheTerrorThatIsSkaPunk 12:59, 19 February 2007 (UTC)TheTerrorThatIsSkaPunk, 19 february 2007, 14:03


edit Alright.

Finally, a topic I'm (kinda) Pro on. Ask away at me, I'll be able to answer most any questions on this one. (P.S. I know I'm a nerd, stop telling me already.)

edit Hints Section removed

I thought it would do the article some greater good to have removed that part of the article. It was kind of unnecessary and unfunny from the get-go, though, if you ask me. -- Hanyouman 21:52, 24 February 2008 (UTC)

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